After dying, our main character found himself summoned by a young woman. She comes from a long line of summoners and had expected to partner up with a powerful being, like the rest of her family. Instead, she summoned a computer programmer, who from now on will be living inside her head. Powerless, he\'s unable to help her with the upcoming war. Disappointed that neither of them had been blessed by fate with some divine abilities, he decides to build a computer system inside her head himself.
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Popular Reviews
More seriously I got a lot of positive feedback so far so I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for your support everyone!
Speaking of Joshua, it's rare to find a good web novel where the MC plays a supporting role. Even rarer is an actually interesting plot with some intrigue and nuance rather than a brawl-fest where power trumps all. Catherine is already making progress towards her goals by building allies and thinking about the big picture (while simultaneously trying to deal with a complicated scheme against her), so I hope this carries on.
One complaint I have is that Joshua feels like too much of a caricature right now. Sure, he got to say his goodbyes, and I can understand that his eccentricity is also a coping mechanism. Still, the guy died not too long ago and now finds himself in a completely unfamiliar world, forced to fulfill a role he never agreed to. I just can't see him coming to terms with the situation that easily. Plus, he should have unexplored sides to him and room to grow as a person, so I hope to see some development later on to make him more human and interesting.
Now comes the elephant in the room: the writing. It's passable for the most part, but the punctuation and paragraph structure need some work. Commas are sometimes abused (or not used when they should be) to make sentences way too long. Combined with the occasional gigantic paragraph, this can make the reading experience very frustrating. They're not too difficult to fix, though: make more liberal use of periods, colons, and semicolons to break things up; and try keeping paragraphs to at most 5-6 lines.
All in all, this has some serious potential, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
The writing quality is excellent, story development is logical and consistent, character design of the main characters are believable and the world background is very intriguing. The world background, in particular, has a sense of mystery and danger that sets it apart from most other "I have a reincarnated in another world with a system" stories.
The only minor flaws of this novel are that the chapter releases have become a bit erratic, and some of the side characters could use more fleshing out. I'd like to see more interaction between the main characters and their adventuring party, for example. Sitting down at the campfire, exploring personal histories or telling stories... that kind of thing while not necessary to the main story, could help us relate to the supporting cast.
In the end, I decided to purchase this book and support the author because I am really enjoying the story. I'd like to read more and see how the relationships develop as the main characters understand more about their world and each other.
❤ The characters deepen as you read and you can love them, especially with our MC, their jokes, their joy and fears
❤ I like that although the MC has its own advantages and weaknesses, and he knows his own ability, he is not desperate to get more power in any way, as is often seen in many other novels
❤ I love the world in which it develops, it has so many possibilities
I study in IT universitas, and like programing.
Hope you novel good always.
Hope MC not to bad, not to Silly.
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